All Comments on 'Back to the Farm Ch. 03'

That was bloody awesome! Pls. hurry on the next chapter! ^_^

Hurry with the next part! I so love this couple!!!

you're such a fantastic writer, reading your stories always makes my day.

I hope you'll finish the other story soon. I like this one too though!!!

Please write as fast as possible - b/c I am seriously addicted.

But I really don't mind. I'm worried about the re-appearance of Jason. Now that's he's all grown up, will he and Melissa mend fences? Or will he still be as nasty to her as he was years ago? <br><br>

I hope Melissa and Matt have to snuggle close all night long to keep warm!

This story is addictive and well written.

That was an awesome chapter! The pace of this story is moving along nicely and I'm really enjoying Lissy and Matt getting to know each other again. The sexual tension building between them leaves me anticipating a very hot renunion!

You do remember this is erotica that you are writing so would you please toss us a crumb of any kind, you know like a solo scene or something... anything!

The story flows! It is just lovely!

Well done Lily, and I'm glad that you find that you need to keep a balance between us and your studies, too! :-)

Roger

So you leave us hanging on Tide and give us another partial story that makes us wanting the ending just as much as Tide?! UGH! You're killing me here!

Another excellent chapter, Lily. I absolutely love the build-up! Keep 'em coming!

Love it! Great story! Im a hopeless romantic for sure! lol Cant wait for both of these stories! Thanks

I actually caught myself holding my breath while reading this!! I absolutely LOVED it. Can't wait for the next installment.

That was simply delicious! I love the way you weave and tantalize, building the story and the characters and the romance as you go. As much as I'd love to see more on "Caught by the Tide," I think I'm equally as engrossed in this story. Can't wait for more...! And thanks for sharing :-)

Another great chapter. Can't wait to read more.

Loving the story. Please hurry with the rest of it.

Really loving your story and am wishing that you come back with more soon! I was contemplating reading Tide, but with how impatient I am to get the next chapter of this one, I thought I'd better not start that one until you complete it!

Beauty. Just beauty.

Melissa was a complete wimp. I have to say that I hate your story. Probably not hate as your story says but strongly dislike.

...I liked the Solstice and Caught by the Tide series better. Your writing is still excellent, but I'm a little lost concerning the plot. Matt and Melissa are thrown together in an unlit farmhouse after what we learn was (was it real then?) teenage relationship some fourteen years ago. Melissa says she hates Matt, but does she really? I'd hoped by Chapter 3, the story would have moved along a little more. You only had four chapters in the Solstice series. Still, it's good enough for me to keep reading.

Whether it is your intention or not, your heroines really are a lovely combination of Victorian and modern. Another person commented that they dislike Lissy because she's a wimp. Well, I'm a wimp, too, so there great satisfaction for me in reading a heroine who's not willowy, not adept, not an "assertive woman", not a sexual athlete, and who finds a sexy man who loves her in spite of - or even because of - herself. Just keep doing what you do so well. ;)

Story is moving way too slowly. anon jerry

This is a lovely chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.

Evanslily is one of the Best story writers on this site. Such that seeking sex thrills you are carried along (most rom types u have scroll just to keep interest. .This is NOT a plea for wham bam; characters need meat before they Love, or screw) But, a bit late, I have 2 sets of concerns. First as one time Alco Unit Superviser I trust most are aware that Cold and drink do Not mix, except perhaps moderatly in warm surroundings, or where sad oblivion is the aim. This is close to the edge and current euro weather possibly raises my cautions. . More relevant; the plot weakness. . This is a maximum of 5 months after they last saw uncle C, AT the Farm! One without transport, the other working on a project. Ie. They stayed. They would know the lay out and rooms backward. Then the state of the bathroom, drive, soft fittings, etc would require either a harsher side to uncle that would not allow ANY interference; or a harder not give a Damn approach to Life of the central characters. I could underline this but I've said enough about myself. This is still, in my opinion, as close to market publishable as site text gets; and are editorial issues.

Alcohol and being cold - you're right. Not a combination to be recommended. I know that as a former nurse. Hell, I know that as a would-be author too. But Matt and Lissy (particularly Matt) don't know. I'm sure Matt must have read somewhere that it might be a good idea, the poor misguided chap. ;-)

Lissy used to catch the bus to go and see her uncle. Matt (when not abroad) lives reasonably near. Yes, they knew the house well. Really well. :) But Charlie would never accept help from either of them, not that Lissy could've afforded to help him out anyway. Don't think that gave Charlie a 'harsher side', more that it shows him to have had pride. He didn't want to spend his money on the house, he wanted to leave them as much as he could. Besides (not meaning to give too much away if you haven't read the rest), he thought the house would be demolished after his death, so couldn't see the point in spending money on it it.

Anyhow… Thanks for brightening my day. I've admitted before that Back to the Farm is the oldest of my works and definitely far from my best. The first four chapters were actually written in 2005, not long after my mother died. The rest was of course written later.

I know someone will ask if I don't allude to it here, but yes - I promise I'm working on the last part of AFY. I won't bore you with the excuses as to why you haven't got it yet, just trust that I have plenty! Back soon! Lx

For the fill. Brain in hypocritical mode! In light of the standard and sustain. Seasonal Best wishes. I read every word of Solstice, brilliant. 'Farm seemed a natural progression. I will read on. Write on.

I was going to wait until I finished the story to comment, but I find I have to now. I'm really enjoying this story. It's the first of yours I've read, but I plan to read all your stuff eventually.

To comment on something you said in your about section: if you get published I don't see why you would have to lose your English-isms. It's part of who you are. I assume that a lost/most of your stories are/will take place in the British Isles somewhere (as you're familiar with it) so it would be odd if they didn't have those -isms. It would be like if I wrote a story set in Canada and I didn't use 'eh' every once in a while. How would you remember it's Canadian?! Lol.

I can't wait to read on!!!

I suddenly have the urge to go out and get a goat to replace my lawnmower.

Thrilling!

transparent but a lovely read none the less - thanks!

Love rekindled 🤞🏼

Enjoying.

Not unlike a cheesy daytime soap opera, this story is horribly addicting. Kudos to the dialog writer!

Well, she's a bit of a wimp!

Forget the negative comments,for me this is a gentle love story unfolding,5 stars all the way