All Comments on 'Back to the Land'

Well written and thoughtful romance.

but you learn something about corn and soybeans, too.

Keep up the good work

Keep them coming

I can't believe i missed this one! Excellent first story.

What wonderful storytelling...you could really FEEL the love between these two! The loving sensuality just permeates from this masterfully erotic piece. And for the love story...amazing!

You truly have a real talent for writing. I do hope you submit many, many more.

Hey - you're good at this - how about some more stories ?

You had a nice holiday,so now it's time to get back to work !!

Thanks for putting a smile back on my face...:-)

i really like the story i have read it before but took my time on it. truly a love story about two people that had been in love all of there life and finally coming back togeather. 5 star plus story.

Ron

a sweet love story.

very romantic, lots of warm fuzzies, feel good, with a happy ending. who could ask for more?

I'm glad I found it, thanks

I think most people have their "What if.....or....If only" stories from "back in the day".

I do, and even though mine was fifty years ago I still think about her almost every day. This story reminds me that occasionally those "What if" stories can have a happy ending. "Thanks" to the author.

Very very nice story. A great romance tale without a lot of drama. Or maybe I should say “Melodrama”. My thanks to the author for this offering.

I hope you continue to write!

One more nice story ruined with anal. If this is how you are going to spoil your stories, I don't think I will read any more of your contributions. Sorry. Just one star. I would have given zero, but then I won't be allowed to write my comments.

This story was really helped by his reminiscing from high school. I enjoy reading your stories.

Good story, but it’s a Cliffs Notes version, I wanted Bill integrating back into the farm after the city, I wanted Julia playing hard to get because she doesn’t trust men anymore, I wanted a gradual transition of governance of Bills parents farm into his as he got back into the swing of things, I wanted Julia’s parents to be there to see their Daughter and Grandkids looked after properly and most of all I wanted a slow, gentle, tentative romance where he gradually melted away her protective carapace to rediscover the teen girl he fell for and she helped him rediscover his old self and rediscover the passion for the simple life he had prior to going to the big city. Clichéd? Possibly, maybe it would have been better too. Perhaps I should write a story, but I’m not ready for that yet.

Many thanks for writing and posting, cheers Ppfzz.

As long as this has been posted I am surprised at only 16 previous comments.

The story is better than it 4.79 rating.

Glad the author is back!

There were so many times I wished there was dialog instead of the narrator telling us what was happening. Giving personalities to the various characters around your main 2 would be great! It's a good story but could be expanded so much more.