All Comments on 'Back Together with His Ex-Wife 03'

You have to give us the end to this story. Ned needs to be castrated; Anna gets back with Peter and they have a 4 way with Janice and Mark...

Whatever...

From time to time you slip from third person into first person (I, me, my).

Also you write 'neither lips' when you mean 'nether lips'. They are little things but they break the flow of the story.

Yeah, having a wife be a slut in the bedroom is awesome. Having one be a common whore just sucks. And eventually will lead to disease anyhow. Sure, it's fiction. But who wants a woman that spreads it around? Maybe some punk little cuck. But not anybody with any real sense of self worth.

With a visual aid, why are the police not looking for Ned for assault, stalking and kidnapping? Not sure what the author is getting after by making all these obvious crimes something to be kept quiet. After all, her husband is in the hospital.