by GeneralMako
Pretty hot scenario altho I dont think you need a vampire to feel
This dominated any half decent man can make u feel just as
Violated as this fucked just as hard as this and also make
U feel fear just as much as this im no goth but this seems like
My kind of fuck when im done edaward will seem like fred flinstone..
The reason I don't like this is because he would never treat her this way so your not a real twilight fan
i dont like this.. if you were a real twilight fan you would know he wold never do this to her
I enjoyed the story. I got excited as I read it. Keep up the good work.