All Comments on 'Backpacker Ch. 01'

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LarryInSeattleLarryInSeattleabout 8 years ago
Loved it!

Especially the boys enjoying each other. Keep up the good work,

JoolibiJoolibialmost 8 years ago
Very hot!

Loved the first part, hope there is more to come...

whenballstouchwhenballstouchover 5 years ago
Great

Really hot story. Loved the interaction between the friends. Seemed believable and hot! Would love to read more double vag themed stories, both buddies emptying their balls in the same pussy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story!! Please write the next episode!! I can not wait to read it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Disappointing dialogue from the "boys" they truly were a couple of morons who got extremely, unbelievably lucky. Their lines made them sound like 10 year olds. No wonder the french hate Americans.

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I used to write all the time, left for a few years and now I'm back. I'm interested in writing long term narratives, fan fic and some pure smut.