All Comments on 'Bad Behaviour Pt. 01'

I find the premise quite interesting and am looking forward to seeing where you take this story. I would only complain that it seemed to jump from one scene to another without really breaking away from the first scene. That was a bit jarring to the flow of your story.

Still, it was overall pretty good, and definitely has potential moving forward.

More.....Please ?

A little brief but enough to catch my interest. You mixed the story and the sex well and made the characters believable. Definitely worth a second chapter to see how the couple interacts with Margaret. Will she attempt to dominate them or come between them or finally see what she's missing by being a bitch in the closet and let them show her some much needed love?

Your bio doesn't tell us anything about you. Are you being mysterious or shy?

Yes please!!! I think this could get very hot! Can't wait!

Me too,

More please

Really got my interest. Can't wait for part 2.

This is going to be good. Looking forward to it

I just hope this is not going where I think it is going