All Comments on 'Bad Day to Break Down'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
My three problems with story....

....are it's too short, two hot women make that offer even a horny male would have to think twice and two year old Hondas do not breakdown!(LOL)-pistolpackinpete

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
i like it!!

Yes, the story is short. I agree about how unusual it is, but it is pretty believable, apart from the honda car.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

Good beginning, but we need more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
make a continuation?

its a good story, if you continued it i would think it would be even better

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
never

never going to happen to me away great story.

wwemikey2510wwemikey2510almost 13 years ago
hi

why do this will you try again

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

great start, add a few more chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
oh please continue with the story, it's beautiful

very nice story keel writing on it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
He's now in a Matriarch Relationship and like being.

Off to a great start.His future place in life to please,obey,be used for amusement/pleasure.Wish was me though. lostrebel66@yahoo.com

OmnitrixOmnitrixover 10 years ago

way hot!

^_^

cant wait for part two!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Story??

Two paragraphs without any plot do not make a story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More please

I would love to see more of this story it's incredibly hot and I want to be along for the ride of his feminization and abuse by those 2 Goddesses

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