All Comments on 'Bad Habits Pt. 02: Temptation'

Claire turned out to cheat on him, but he only found out just b4 the wedding, as he continued to thing of camilla, he deside to cancel the wedding and go back to camilla.

You can work it from there.

Didn't much care for the ending as for me the only proper ending would have been to ride off into the sunset with Camilla. This ending just did nothing for me as a reader, the buildup with Camilla left you with expectations and that wasn't accomplished with the way it ended.

I agree with Rancher46 about the ending. He should have risked asking Camilla out. I think she was falling in love with him as well. They should have gotten together in the end. Great story other then that