All Comments on 'Bad Medicine Chronicles Ch. 01'

Please continue. Also please no lesbian, have the son take charge and have his mother pleasure his friends/cousins/teachers/uncles/strangers!

I also picked up on the 'raven-haired blond' as well as a few your instead of you're and vice-versa, but overall a very good story. Can't wait to read part 2. 5 stars here

Great piece of writing. I really loved the manipulation angle. More involvement with the therapist. Take the mother down more humiliation, deprave situations. Include the daughter.

I had to skim this weak offering. If it was meant to be humorous, it wasn't. It certainly wasn't erotic. If the mysterious musings by the therapist after her conversation with her receptionist were supposed to prime me for future reads, they failed. Simply muddled up a disjointed story even more. I suppose that some readers will be interested in finding out who the hell Vincent might be but I can say with certainty that I won't be back to find out! **

Why did you have the therapist give her "a multifunctional device that provides immediate voice communication", like it's some kind of strange technology out of Star Trek? It's called a cellphone. It's 2016, how can anyone not know what a cellphone is?

I read the first page and skimmed the rest. There's 4 minutes of my life that I'll never get back. I will make it a point to not read any more of your lousy stories.

Good story

Ok to all the people talk shit what have written t Late I see all you talk down but none of you have ball to post anything think ever writer listened To you then we would have no stories to read so shut and be happy some has the ball post

I enjoyed your story and find the critics are usually non writers who just want to attack regardless of quality.Do another segment and critics be damned.

about what the terms "muddled" and "disjointed" may mean in relation to your story. And, yes, your late start at writing is certainly no help. Consider the fact that there are very few writers out there anywhere who go it alone. They have proofreaders, editors, rewrite assistants, etc. if you are serious about continuing, then please consider getting a little help. Good luck with your future endeavors.

Can't wait for Bad Medicine Chronicles Ch. 02! I'll be checking to see if you've written anything else to tide me over in the meantime. Great story!

A masterpiece Sir !! : ) Look forward to the next part , I actually felt as if I was there in the room watching her do this , amazing stuff my friend !! : ) Thank you.,

Having said.....

This needs some serious editing.

Their comments are posted to hurt, and your butt-hurt response gives them validation. Don't give them that satisfaction, delete and move on, your story is what it is, if it was good enough for you, then surely that's all that matters. Rise above it.

The whole premis was so out there I never could get into it. Didn't even get hard and that is rare for me. *

ohh l love the way you write.. your idea's.. thank you so much for your hard work and energy.. please keeping writing.. you have special gifts.. thank you..

can't wait to read the next chapter

I really loved this chapter. I hope it continues like this with the mother becoming her son's slut and not someone's else whore (like Vincent).

Please continue this has a hot topic which needs expanding

more please

still waiting on the second chapter

please write another chapter

I can't wait for part two. What a fantastic device to train mothers and sons to elevate their love. Not only do I want to hear about this couple but others as well Imagine a town where a thousand mothers are laying flat on their backs moaning in extacy as their sons thrust away on their mothers pussy. Mothers acting like depraved sluts desperate to coax one more load from their sons balls. Imagine the mother dressed in her sexiest lingere on all fours, her son diligently working his hard cock in and out of her womb. Mom and son howl together in pleasure as the her son fills her fertile womb with yet another load incestious seed. Imagine a town where in 6 months the big story is the sudden middle aged baby boom. 40 something mothers pregnant in mass and the water cooler talk is how many husbands claim they have not had sex in months and are not the fathers.

Oh my God, YESsssss. She definitely needs another full load of his cum in her hot cunt. She needs to have it filling her up and making her even more of a good mommy slut. She needs to drink his juice right from the source. Wrap her hot lips and mouth on that huge cock, lick and suck his bloated balls. She may need to teach his sister how to help out so she doesn't have to do it all. She may even find out how hot and horny it will make her, watching brother and sister fuck. She'll likely want to join in, cleaning them both with her hot tongue, getting them all three horny enough for the eventual three some. mmmmm

Dale