by MVPrimetime
... but couldn't find a 6 to vote ...
Thanks alot for this detailed view of feelings, actions, ... this makes the story so good.
Hope for a Chapter 3 to see what's going on next friday.
Yes chapter three will be forthcoming, although another chapter of Life Sentence and maybe If I knew Then is coming first...
Blisteringly erotic, psychological, full of musing and spellbinding overtones. Impossible to characterize to anyone who doesn't read it. Characters and situations that haunt the mind, exciting heart and loins in tandem. Casts a web that is truly difficult to shake, as only the most intricate erotica can, making you care deeply on a human as well as erotic plane, in a way that only heightens its astonishing erotic impact.
Many thanks for your comments CeliaisAliena, they are especially welcome since I have now had a look at your work, and am enjoying Sheila's Training very much. I have confessed to my attention seeking neediness in the past (why else does anyone publish anything?) but praise from a good writer is doubly ego boosting!
What a fucked up girl Tara is ...constantly pushing her own agenda at the expense of Penny who is nowhere near ready to be pushed in to these things. Sean is pathetic ...he isn't seeing to his girlfriends emotional needs one bit and he's allowing them to push her what a creep ...he deserves to lose Penny !! .As you can see great writing since I'm sat here fuming lol
Penny is so pliant to Tara's suggestions/instructions/orders. I am eager to see where Tara leads her, and just how obedient Penny will become and follow.
Without wishing to place a spoiler, why wasn't the match game/technique used later? The more I read this series the more I am impressed with your skill in outlining their justification for the extreme behaviour. If you have not read this series then start at Chapter 1 and read them all. You will not be disappointed!