All Comments on 'Bad Teacher: Living Together Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wow great stories!!!

Keep up the great work. Can wait for the next stories u have coming up. Sure hope is soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
an idea

this happened to a friend of mine...he was banging an older woman and one of his friends found out about it....The friend wanted to experience the same thing. So, after a little coercion, his older woman was "reluctantly pushed" to set up a double date with her young lover and his friend. After some convincing, the other woman and the guy's frind became lovers as well...Would love to see how this author would treat that...the writing is really good

tnadnudertnadnuderover 10 years ago
I'm curious...

Given the way you've taken this, & the several mistakes per story, thinking this may be the end of their relationship..

Maybe just write tales of Carmen with other men, &/or Ryan with other women, or a few of both, maybe simultaneously in the same story?!

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
I LIKED THIS A LOT

Hope you will write more, wonderful no matter the errors

OmniferisOmniferisover 10 years ago

tnadnuder why would you want to ruin a good thing, by having her with other guys and wanting him with other women? This is a great story and I hope you do a couple of more pieces for it. Maybe have it come out where Eva is his and then thye have a second child or maybe twins.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Excellent Chapters

Thank you! I hope more chapters follow soon.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Let down

Good story line...still needs more editing...hated the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Besides the fact this whole scenario isn't even close to being any where near believable especially an 18 year kid? Nope a woman like this wouldn't be with a child it would have been better if he was a senior in college not a high school kid. Secondly screwing the ex in front of a pissed off husband would have gotten that 18 year old kid ass beat. The way he constantly is groping her is like a little kid would act. So many inconsistencies but a 18 year old doing all this is unbelievably bad even in a fantasy sorry it's just poor story telling. The sex scenes are written really well I just skip to those I don't have to read the terrible story

NickCaveNickCaveabout 1 year ago

Ryan is at least 19, probably 20 by this point in the story. He's attending college.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

The cucking of Peter is next-level hilarity. He's just so outmatched and out of his league, it's not even funny. Can't imagine how fucked and humiliated he must've felt watching that fucking scene. Seeing his wife being completely owned by a huge cock and superior lover. And hearing her beg to be filled, impregnated, and call herself her lover's slut, when she was previously so timid. Damn, son!

He should have told Peter Eva wasn't his. That would have been hilarious. Maybe later, I hope. With the threat of the blackmail he could have got away with it as well. Then he would have been really defeated, even more so than he already was. Oh, and tell her he also fucked her ass and she fucking loved it. And he was cucked during their marriage and... oh so much salt that could have been rubbed in the wound.

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