All Comments on 'Bad Work Day - The Jewellery Store'

I enjoyed it very much , luv ur writing style just one thing i thought it was a little rushed at the end but definately worth reading

Clever, well written, quite enjoyable.

In case anyone is wondering, 'jewellery' is an accepted form of this word. Thank you everyone who managed to look past our differences and enjoyed the story nonetheless.

Throughly enjoyable romp. good pacing, memorable characters and plenty of hot sex. I include the first part of Bad work Day as well in these comments. I will make sure to read more of your material as it appears very promising.

By all means, keep writing!

What a twist. Loved it!

The last paragraph made the story