All Comments on 'Bag of Chips and a Fuck Toy'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
maths

If she is 35 and you are 11 years younger then your a 14 year old DJ at a club

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Re previous comment

35 - 11 is 24 ffs.

It's 'you're a......' and not 'your a....'

kjanekjanealmost 8 years ago
Liked it.

Outside of a few typos, this was a fun read. I liked the age difference angle, the seduction, and the setting. The internal narration was also revealing and hot. Nicely done.

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