All Comments on 'Bahamian Arms'

Good story line. Please fill in more details about Carter's professional life as Shade

I'd definitely like to read more about these characters. More please!!

YOU ARE TOO GOOD. KEEP IT UP!!!

Carter Donovan ranks right up there with James Bond and Nick Carter. More, please!

Enjoyed the story very much. I would suggest that you dont neglect the nicely setup storyline of Addison. You can expect me to keep a lookout for more of your stories in the future.

Addison is any young teenage boy's wet dream. Great Story, i would love to read more about all the characters that was involved in this story, especially Addison and Carter. They would make a hot couple.

This story demands a sequel!

Could be one of the best stories if you make a sequel. it ended to abrubtly with them just going different ways.

Title says it all. You really can't just leave a story like that, it needs a sequel, otherwise it's just a cliffhanger that's never going to be satisfied.

I would love to know if they would ever meet again. It is a wonderful story, please don't let them part forever!

This was such a great story so well written and the characters so well thought out and exicuted!! You both have a gift for writing keep it up and please keep the stories coming!!! Happy New Years to the both of you!!

Thanks

and it had an actual plot. Please do at least one more chapter.

A very good story, but should be in the ‘Erotic Couplings’ category. Very little romance...