All Comments on 'Bait a Hook Ch. 04'

some of us like it slow and easy ;-)

I agree I like it slow, relations usually don't just happen over night.

I have to echo the sentiments of my fellow commentors. Take your time and keep this story good. Rushing it will only make you skip things or paraphrase. This story has a good storyline, and I'm really enjoying it. Can't wait for Chapter 5!

I was never worried about the speed of the story, slow build up is good unless there are battles. I would just like longer chapters. Not a huge fan of the one pagers.

I'm southern so I do like things slow and easy! This is one amazing read. I honestly love the pace you have set for this story. Still enthralled!! Keep up the great work!!

I can sense a "Bobby and Rob" moment cumming (pun intended). It should be a wonderful moment when they connect. Rob seems genuinely interested in Bobby and his work, and Rob seems a wonderful sexy catch, if he can find sexual satisfaction with Bobby. I can see them caressing hairy chests and thighs, muscled shoulders and arms, exploring mouths and chests and cocks with laving tongues, and drinking down cum loads together.

Longer chapters or faster development of the characters' relationship would make the story a lot better.

'Can't even bait a hook.' Bobby seems to have the same problem with fish as he appears to with Rob. I love the lazy river dance of attraction between the guys. Splendid story so far. Looking forward to your next chapter and who makes the first move.

I think the pace of the story is fine. The way you started it off you don't want to jump straight into things plus a new school, new atmosphere, new people it is great to see things shaping up slowly and nicely. Rob obviously has a great sense of humor and I like the way they are getting to know each other first. Cute one liners too

Don't listen to the complaints about the pace...there is definitely an audience for slower (more realistic!) pacing.

I actually think the pace is a bit rushed.

"his rod started flexing".... I had another thought

I just wanted you to know this is about my 6th time reading and I stilllll love this book! You should get them both published!