by Dark_Brother
this story so far is full of fucking win and needs more chapters faster... at this same length of course, more possibly even...
but that matters little, want more!!!! DO WANT!!!
Thoroughly worth the time to read. I like that you're developing it slowly, and this installment is a good length. Now, let's get into chapters 2-20!
Great story. I was guessing through the whole thing. Let's see what is in ch 2...
Nicely written stories like this are hard to find on this site. I look forward to reading the rest of the series!
Well done! I'm looking forward to the rest of this! Thank you!