All Comments on 'Bait and Switch Ch. 01'

by Dark_Brother

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
well...

this story so far is full of fucking win and needs more chapters faster... at this same length of course, more possibly even...

but that matters little, want more!!!! DO WANT!!!

hodunkhodunkover 12 years ago
O K

NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
YES

More. Quickly. Great story.

pyro55555pyro55555over 12 years ago

Fantastic story, want wait for the next chapter!

FerrumitzalFerrumitzalover 12 years ago

Thoroughly worth the time to read. I like that you're developing it slowly, and this installment is a good length. Now, let's get into chapters 2-20!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

That was fab - what a great start to the story!

Can't wait for more!

periconenepericoneneover 12 years ago
Can't wait for more!!!

man i liked your story

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Great writing

Great story. I was guessing through the whole thing. Let's see what is in ch 2...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Awesome

Thanks that was hot!

MolagBalMolagBalalmost 12 years ago
Nicely written!

Nicely written stories like this are hard to find on this site. I look forward to reading the rest of the series!

TSreaderTSreaderover 4 years ago
A brillant start!

Well done! I'm looking forward to the rest of this! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
grate start

I enjoyed you'r story

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