All Comments on 'Baking Cookies'

by brynhild84

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steveindasteveindaover 19 years ago
Nice work, gratifying to read good healthy sex sty

Very nice story of one on one romance and sex, just the way I like it. Nice build to a lovely finish. Tatoo bit added some interest but was a little distracting...

N8DreamsN8Dreamsabout 19 years ago
sexy

Thats the way I think an erotic story should be written.

Highly recommended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
shirt?

is she wearing a tight white t-shirt, or a shirt with buttons and/or a light pink shirt? this was a bit confusing and distracting.

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