All Comments on 'Ballerina Slut Ch.1'

by tyra_dahmer

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DKayeDKayeabout 18 years ago
Not Bad

Loved the cucumbers. The story could have been drawn out a bit, though.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
I give it a 5

I thought the story was great. Although I agree with the other responder, it could have been drawn out a bit more. You need to write more!

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