All Comments on 'Bambi & Me'

beautiful story, very well written, i dunno if its a true story or not, but it does not matter :)

loved most of it just no explanation as to how and why mom helped them get together in the first place.

You never finished this part of the story:

"Morning Mom," I answered. I was a little embarrassed to see her after all that had happened in the last day. "Umm, mom? I just..."

She didn't let me finish. She just put a finger on my lips and said, "Later."

There never was a "later."

Was really hoping that with all that happened, mom wouldn't be neglected. But, she was.

:(

Love is love and sex is sex, and when both happen at the same time there is sanity in the world of humanity. It would be nice to know how Mom came to her decision to encourage events, but all in all a very nice story.

seem to be missing a couple of chapters here ?

what about mom

Maybe with Mum in the equation.

You never finished this part of the story:

"Morning Mom," I answered. I was a little embarrassed to see her after all that had happened in the last day. "Umm, mom? I just..."

She didn't let me finish. She just put a finger on my lips and said, "Later."

There never was a "later."

Was really hoping that with all that happened, mom wouldn't be neglected. But, she was.

Amazing. Well written story but I always thought mom was going to get involved. That would have made it pretty much complete.

I, too, wanted to know Mom's reasoning. Not that I can't live without it and I know it is just a story. Maybe there can be a sequel. It was REALLY good.

A nicely-written incest romance, good for you. Yes - I too would have liked for Mom to become involved, but write to your own dictates.

Reading this story was wonderful, makes me wish my family was more like this one...

Im literally speechless, great great job, wish I could rate more than 5 stars

Moms motives seemed to be the whole backdrop of the story yet we never even get a hint at what they were leaving me thinking- what were they?! With that huge chunk missing I have to list this as incomplete and drop it from great to fair.

wow, this story was amazing from start to finish

I loved this charming yet sexy story! I want to read more of your works!

I have been a reader at literotica for many years and this is my first comment. I found your story to be one of if not the best I have ever read and would have loved to rate it more than 5 stars if that was possible. I would really enjoy reading more of your work and again it was amazing.

One question: How did Mom know?

Thank you for writing.

you have a good story BUT you left some plot holes big enough to drive a se mi through. either write a second chapter to fill in the the holes or get a ghost writer to do it for you. half a story is worse than no story at all and this was less than half.

1) no begining to tell why she wanted him so bad.

2) no explaination from the mom as to why she helped set him up with his sister.

3) kind of rushed once it started need to slow down and build the plot.

4) need to develope the characters better.

5) what happens next?

more plot holes than swiss cheese time to fill them in with a second chapter DON'T BE LAZY DO IT RIGHT.

the incest was hot. loved the story right up until they reproduced. :( oh well.

First off, congratulations on not involving their mother more than you did. There's no such thing as a threesome romance. People who want to get the mother involved (which would have ruined the story) need to learn the difference between romance and sex.

As mentioned, a bit more justification would not go amiss, nor would fleshing out the storyline a bit more and maybe put some more focus on the emotional development of the characters. But as it is, it's fine.

Finally, my compliments about your spelling and grammar. It's one of the very few cases where I didn't notice much, if anything, amiss.

A cute story, this, though even more farfetched than the usual incest story. I agree with other posters who would have wanted to read more about the mother, particularly about why she played matchmaker. But thank you for NOT including the mother in the sex.

Sexy, cute, fun. And although I agree we’d all like to know more about mom and why she pushed - we’re probably ever going to find out. Too bad.

Nothing wrong with escapism. You write well. I enjoyed that easily enough to 5 it.

Its nice to read a wonderful love filled incest story between brother and sister. A story where love and respect is the main theme. I just read one where the brother got off on his older sister being in a frat house gang bang and also stood by as his younger sis was almost gang raped as she was passed out drunk. That was disgusting garbage this story was a great story with a wonderful ending. Thank you.

I love sibcest stories where that are all about love and respect and have follow up showing their long term success. The mom encouraging them is a pretty cool twist but you never told us her motivation for it. Five stars and added to my favorites.

bare pussy, what a let down. she looked like a little kid...

Sis could you please grow some hair down there. You make me feel like a damn pedophile!

Nice little story. Well written. Certainly didn't mind the brother/sister portion of the story, but I (along with many others apparently) want to know why the mother helped/pushed them along into it. Something tells me that she has incest in her past too, but I guess we will never know now.

Usually, I'm not into threesomes including mom, son, and sister, but the way you wrote it made it seem weird not to include mom. I kind of feel bad for her. 2*

Incest sex always gets me happy and even better brother and sister fake marriage and kids too boot. I had hoped maybe mom would have joined them sexually but maybe with the grand kids...... Anyways I loved he story fact or fiction doesn't matter, I got horny anyways.

too bad its just a story for me. I loved the brother sister sex. I too had hoped mom joined in it would have been great to read. Maybe the kids as she gets older introduces sibling sex to them too.

It was pretty cool.

That was lovely. A nice surprise that the mom was helping push them along. Bonus points for Bambi being a virgin and saving herself for her brother. Mothers really do know best. It was odd that there was no explanation given outright as to her actions. I'm left assuming that she just wants her children to be happy regardless of societies rules and views. The best part was that she didn't get involved sexually; kudos on your restraint against what seems to be an all-too-common way to ruin an incest romance story.

I do wish there was more to the story. Would have loved to read about their life a bit more, but glad they had a nice little happy family at least.