All Comments on 'Bandmates Fell in Deep Love'

I think for a first time writing you did awesome! Hope you decide to write more! Thanks for sharing your story!

That was great! Very satisfying read. I think my cookie box needs a good workout now.

Very good first story! This is meant to be continued. I really enjoyed reading this story. I hope you continue to write because I will definitely be looking for more.

Once again, fantastic job!

Didn't you also post this story to Reddit?

Great story! Especially for your first entry. The only thing that bothered me was the use of "cookie box" "chocolate starfish", and "lady parts". For me they're a bit of a mood killer. I felt like I was reading something a kid would have written/said. It just thro me off. I do hope you continue this story, tho! I eagerly wait to chapter 2! :D

What a great story for your first time writing. Loved the descriptions and feelings. You need to give us a second half of these two girls. Loved it keep up the good work--Thanks