All Comments on 'Bankrupt Ch. 01'

This chapter is a really good start; Reviving Indentured servitude and debt slavery into a futuristic dystopia where obedience is assured using mind control implants. Looking forward to seeing how the story evolves.

No other words needed simply brilliant!

Again, another story I would've given 5 stars, except for typos/a lack of proofreading. Keep up the good work. Very interesting story, eliciting a love/hate response to the main character's dilemma.

I really liked this! This is my second time through this story! Please write more of this series!

....risk the criticism of miscategorizing your work. For the record, you got it right.

Yes, it's a Sci-Fi setting, but it's a MC story...and somewhat out of the usual scenario, so bravo there, too.

Thoroughly enjoyable, very, very few technical errors in the execution, with good characterization.

Don't we all just HATE our heroine's antagonist?

Looking forward to the rest of this one!

Thank you.

The female main character is one the reader might be able identify with, but the male rich spoiled loser, is not a character many would like or identify with. The female character is then placed into a position of being controlled by a character that has been setup from the beginning to be hated. The story is set with in a high school setting that is not even close to being something one would believe. The story is told from the female main character point of view but there is not one character in this story that is likable

I enjoyed both the style of writing and the content. Its quite hard to find any MC stories like this, with a lust/hate kind of relationship that involves a male dominant and slavery. Please keep up the good work and post a second chapter of this soon, I've been checking back every few days or so in hopes of it.

Is there a second chapter commingled.

Sequel please!!

love the concept for this story. I wish the heroine was developed a little more, tell us more about her likes and dislikes. Does she miss her family and friends. it just jumped right to the mind control sex. (which was really creative!!! and I love this brain chip concept) I hope.she meets other students in the same situation in the next chapter

I am IMPRESSED!!! That was a truly well done scene. It was an excellent display of submission, with shades of non consent and humiliation mixed in that highlighted rather than detracting. The final few words of the chapter are enough closure that the story could end right there and be great. But that said... I am really looking forward to the next chapter!

i love the way the chip works.