All Comments on 'Bar Pick-up'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Bar Pick-up

Well-written tale. Foreshadowing is excellent. I did understand the conclusion. Well done.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Nice Turnaround

Last sentence redeemed this story. Until then, it had been a rather banal tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
A REAL LOVING WIVES STORY....

A wife actually loving her husband and doing what it takes to make sure the marriage is exciting and mutually exclusive. Why don't you guys get more stories like this on the site?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
BRAVO! LOVE IT. A WELL CRAFTED STORY. EROTIC. REALISTIC. ROMANTIC, TOO. I GAVE IT A 5- [☆☆☆☆☆- (4.6)]

:-)

thedemonIxthedemonIxover 4 years ago
And a twist at the end!

Cause I wasn't already leaking wet already. ..

I wanna read this again. ... You get 5 star and a

favorite and I ?... well I get off. WIN! WIN!

Sman4444Sman4444over 1 year ago

Great last line! Gave me some good ideas!! Thanks

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