All Comments on 'Bard's Tale 02 - First Outing'

Error-wise, it's better than the first tale, but still replete with gaffs. This was originally a much longer tale, but I broke it up, and that may have helped. The third tale should be up in a few days. I'll post corrections in a few days. Working on Starlight Gleaming next.

To all those who muddled through and still found something worthwhile, a hearty thank you. Slainté

The story is great even with the occasional error. It doesn't get in the way of reading. Looking forward to seeing what happens when they get back out into the world.

I'm hopping to see part three arriving soon! Keep up the the good work!

I saw a couple of errors but nothing a second pair of proof reading eyes would not have caught! Lol

Anonymous, did you see that there five more adventures for you to read, all the way through Bard's Tale 07. Enjoy!

Slainté