All Comments on 'Bare Paw Ranch Ch. 01'

I remember this story, are you the original author

This is almost word for word a story from a couple of years ago.

I remember this from an earlier post. If you are the original author you should finish the story and you should have furnished a disclaimer about copying it from someone else

It is my original story and now has six chapters. I pulled it orinally because it was not published the way I wanted. It again isn't done the way I want. The story has some sketches that go with it. They are doodles not art and not good enough to be put in illustrated category. If someone wants to help me repost this again so it is like I have it in Word, then let me know. I won't bother publishing another chapter until then. I put a note in the authors notes to not publish this if it was not as I wrote it.

Thanks for replying. I would like to see further chapters if the doodles are not really important to the content. You are doing good with the story and the doodles will not help with your writing skills.

I am tempted to say, fire your editor. Still spelling errors and grammatical typos that remain. It is though, a good read. It needs no added doodles or illustration.

Like others, I remember this being posted before. I did a search for the earlier version, but gather from your reply, you managed to remove it somehow. Hence, the earlier version was no longer available. Please submit the other five chapters.

Devir Ginator

For your first attempt I thought it was good. Unlike others I haven't read this story before. Would like to see where you take the characters from here. A solid 4.

Fortunately, I saved the original versions of the first three chapters of this saga. I always wondered why you stopped when you did. Now I know.

It will be interesting to see what changes you made to the plot. While it may be somewhat repetitious, please post chapters 2 and 3 individually in quick succession - possibly over a two day period, then add the remaining three new chapters at whatever rate you prefer. I find that I ignore stories with more than 4 pages to them, unless they are openly described as novels. Basically, I have a short attention span. Mea culpa.

As far as illustrations go, I agree with other posters that they are not needed, although neither should they be discouraged if you feel they help with the plot - assuming you learn how to embed them properly.

As an author, I've seen several "re-formattings" of my works by various forum software programs. I have learned the hard way to always use the "preview" option to proof-read what will appear before I press the "submit" button. This allows me to manually edit line and/or page breaks, indentations, obvious foolish mistakes, etc. as needed. Despite using the spellcheck function in MSWord, I usually find sentence structure, duplicate words, or grammatical errors as well and can make the corrections. I appreciate constructive criticism on my plots and styles, but do get upset with myself when someone points out an obviously overlooked error or incomplete sentence that I should have caught.

NWRaptor

I liked the story the first time you posted it. I liked it again rereading it. Between you & SpikeCO, the story reads well. Keep up the good work.

but it is too disjointed to be a good 'story'!

There are areas where it seems like a collection of sentences that just don't 'flow' properly. "He did, she did, they did, etc."

You need to get some advice on the construction of a good story.

Not sure how many names you post under but this is the third time I have seen this.

Did not read this version.

I'm the original author of this story and have never published it under any other name but syd649 or on SOL as Syd. This is only the 2nd time I have tried to publish it here and would like to know if anyone has seen it somewhere else or if it is published here by someone else. I'm not a computer wiz and can't seem to figure out a way to post the story as to the way I have written it on Word. If anyone is intersted in helping me post it correctly let me know and I will send a copy of it to you in Word. I have seven other stories in the works and hope to sometime publish them here also. Thanks Syd

Looking forward to more!!!!

Hi i enjoyed the first installment an look forward to see where the story goes. my only criticism, as such, is that you need to become more detailed with your sex scenes.

Enjoyed it.

just read this love it please wright more.

Loved the read, my only disappointment is that all those gorgeous hairy pussies got shaved. Otherwise great setting and lots of play going on and I expect more to cum.

After living and Gunnison and visiting my sister in Kansas City, I'm curious as to why you drive to Denver instead of heading east from Colorado Springs

This is a story of fiction and I never gave it a thought about going I70 to Limon to US 24 to US 285 or US 50 from Kansas to Gunnison. Besides there is a nudist resort along 285 at Tiny Town if you take I70 to 470 to 285