All Comments on 'Barefoot Girls Love Playing Games Ch. 02'

This second one is shorter, but better than the first. I think I like Kelly's character the most. Great story dude, looking forward to more!!

You improved on everything with this second story. I'm excited see what you do with Amy and Maddison.

Really enjoying these stories so far though can you please take more care to proofread and correct some very basic spelling and word use issues? It becomes quite distracting and can change the meanings or confuse us readers at times. One major example is the word "defiantly" you keep using instead of "definitely". It would be appreciated. Otherwise keep going and I'd love to see what's next!

Thanks for writing, I love these stories.

Can't wait to see how this all plays out hope the new story comes out soon

I ve really enjoyed this series, hope to see a ch 4 ! I don t even have a foot fetish and I want to play with Kelly's feet,

Well other than a weirdness of not having any interest in a girl if I don't like her feet... Heh.. Well, always have wanted a girl to get me off with her feet at least once, something oddly kinky about that. Offered to suck my wife's toes once on a whim (fresh out of the shower) but she looked at me like I had slipped a gear, lol.

Normally this topic material wouldn't even get a second glance from me, but this is oddly erotic and hot! Wondering what sister's deal/game/wants are too!

He'll prolly lose his cherry with sis, but I was hoping for shy Amy ;)

You ae such an amazing writer. I am literally crying because it just captures so much intimacy. originally I just wanted to read some erotic fiction on feet just to see what feet guys are into. this was so sweet and beautiful !!!