by ScarredRaven
That was so hot, I got so horny reading that I really hope it has another part to it, keep up the good work.
Been loving the story so far. Hope you keep it going. Hope you revisit your other one as well. I just noticed today though. You literally uploaded this chapter, on my birthday. I may not have noticed at the time, but great birthday present.
like the others have said, please more. very good story that needs to keep going.
As I have said in the previous story, Heather must pay for what she has done to her sister, and not only in a sexual way, although that would also be very hot.
Her domineering personality and manipulations are all very well for sex, but she literally abused her sister's trust in her without feeling any remorse, and she seems to feel that simply manipulating people will all turn out her way.
She must realize the emotional pain she caused her sister, and feel emotional pain in return, to realize that certain white lies are fine as mischief, but you cannot harm people without consequences.
Perhaps, in return, her sister will discover that she really liked eating her pussy, and she will do so willingly during the reconciliation between the two, or even something mutual between the two girls.
Oh my god, this is so amazingly hot. Thank you so much for this story!
This is feedback for this series as a whole: really fun scenarios, hot setup; at points pandering more to wish-fulfilment that to plausible reality maybe, but no less fun for it!
Could have used some proofreading but that wasn't too much of a mood-killer in all fairness