All Comments on 'Barfly'

It's been months since I've visited this sight, having become disenchanted with the stories and their quality. Thank you for restoring my admiration for amateur writers. This story is magnificent. Thank you for sharing it with us.

Fantastic! Very hot! Very well written! Loved the twist at the end! Please write more!

I admit to frequently scanning a story, looking for the best bits, the ones that resonate or turn me on. I read each word of this and was delighted and warmed. Lovely prose.