All Comments on 'Barista Boy'

by emmemagdalene

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mel_pomenemel_pomeneover 8 years ago
A well-written and entertaining first story

Thank you, welcome, and please have four stars for a good read. More like it, please!

JamesRTickitJamesRTickitover 8 years ago
Enjoyable

I enjoyed this story but is it realistic?

Young man has waited years for her.

Good entertainment

emmemagdaleneemmemagdaleneover 8 years agoAuthor
suggestion noted

Maybe it would not be realistic to think he waited only for her, but I'd imagine he got up to other things. Maybe I should include a note about that? Thanks for reading and posting. It feels good to share.

yesterdaysyesterdaysover 8 years ago

Keep sharing....Hoping for a sequel.

RedtextRedtextover 8 years ago
Nice short story

You certainly "went down" to the essential (pun wasn't intended).

Short and sweet fantasy.

LovekarmaLovekarmaover 8 years ago
Something I can relate to

Great first story, hope you write about Elise again. Love that she's 40 with daughters 19 or 20 yrs old. I'm sure Elise has had many more fantasies!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

We need more stories like this on here.

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