by MicheleNylons
This is more a comment on the series thus far, I must say for one who happened on it by coincidence I was very engrossed. You do a very good job incaptivating your audience. I look forward to your further developments. I could actually see this being a syndicated TV show. Keep up the good the good work.
your writing is so vivid and wonderful that I want to be right there and be the fifth girl.. please continue
Great piece of Erotica. Awesome sex scenes and enough story to not get boring. Great job!
This shit gets me hard. Everytime i read a story with long hard meat, sliding, glistening pre cum, hot cum, shooting and spurting, i wanna j/o so hard. Thanks for the nice xrated picture u painted.