All Comments on 'Barrack Room Betty Ch. 16'

Still a very nice story

you wrote another good one.. the story is complete but allowing for more if it is envisioned later.. well done

My 1st and only comment was left with chapter 8. Today, I had the pleasure of discovering 8 more chapters, and as previously mentioned, I just could not stop reading. Thank You for an amazing story, I thoroughly enjoyed every moment, suspense, romance, bitch biting, excitement, discovery, sex, love!

Thank You Thank You Thank You

Michele, I daresay you are the "Carlotta" of erotic prose!

I have read quite a few of your stories and Michael Nyland is the main character in the ones I have read. This story is much like the story where Michael Nyland was an accountant who was put in prison for being impaired and causing an accident where a person died and while in prison was pushed into being a transvestite prostitute.

Loved the stories look forward to reading others . The writing is fantastic totally identified with the main character love to read a follow on .

I'm so enthralled and committed to this tale. I need to know what happens next

Have just read the entire story and can’t wait to see what happens next

love it needs to go further to where love joy tries to kill michele but fails because every one else is there and he is beaten to near death

Great, well told story. I think I will join the Royal Navy.