All Comments on 'Basement Fun: First Blowjob'

A BJ---What does girl get? --He does not give a shit

I like that this was on the realistic side. No one knows what the heck to do with a cock the first time so it added a lot to the story when he needed to help.

But here's what I would have liked to know:

-who is this guy? a neighbor? boyfriend in town? boyfriend away at college back in town for the summer? the boy she was always "just friends" with until he went to school/europe/band camp and she realized she had a crush on him?

-what does he look like? what does she look like?

-are her parents upstairs? at work? be more specific about how they would react

basically just details stuff :-)

thanks for posting.

I didn't really mean for this to be a control sort of encounter. :3 I'm sort of submissive, so I suppose those undertones shone through.

I might revise it a bit, from the feedback.

The story is well paced and quite believable. Very erotic. I'm always turned on by a description of the girl kissing him after he's cum in her mouth. mmmmmmmm

i wish u cud do tht to me sexy girl!