All Comments on 'Basic Anatomy'

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catman71catman71almost 14 years ago
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this was good, and funny, please more of these two

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Sequel, please?

Liked this very much and would love to read more. The premise of this story is quite interesting and offers lots of possibilities for further chapters :-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Decent so far...

I'd like to see you continue this story, have her open up to him, give her some kind of story, a little romance wouldn't hurt, and be more descriptive with everything. I'd like to see this turn into a story that I can re-read and not get bored of it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
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This is start of a beautiful story.

Please don't let end here.

dinkymacdinkymacalmost 10 years ago
Nice!

Thanks for sharing.

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There's not much to tell. I've been writing different works, serious and silly, erotic and political, for the past decade. I enjoy reading and writing and I think there is nothing greater then to connect mentally and intellectually with the people that read my work. If yo...