by Kellog
The most unrealistic part of this segment of the story is that Joey left the bench during a game and went underneath the bleachers to fuck her brother and Kevin. That's just not plausible. The rest of it has an erotic tone to it, but it still is a bit on the unbelievable side of reality. I think the author would be better to sit back and ask what is reasonably possible and what is just unrealistic and try to use that criteria for a basis of writing.