All Comments on 'Bastille Day Ch. 13'

You have a great talent for writing and writing sensual stories !

Only negative thing is this continued use of 'snorted'. Isn't that what pigs do?

Maybe I'm wrong...

The same Anonymous it seems.

Pigs do snort, of course, but so do humans: the opposite of sniff, only the sound of the person expelling forcefully air through his or her nose in surprise or shock, maybe with a smile, maybe with frown. Which one should be apparent in the context of the story. Odds are that you do too, just don't consider it a snort.