All Comments on 'Bath Time for Two'

Good starting point, would have liked to see the story continue in

Makes me wish you were my daughter. Looking forward to more. SH

Quit writing in 1st person. It's hard to read. Only the zombies on Literotica enjoy it.

Need more. I almost cum but not yet

beginnings, building sensuously. Well done. And to the individual who described the story as 'first person' - it is actually a mix of first and second person. Not easy to do, but done quite well here.

Poorly written in some places.

It's hard to become aroused when it's written like this, I get bored. Just stick with third person POV, it's less distracting.

This sweet story reminds me of my daughter and myself. She used to help me with the occasional bath and shower.

Lolidoli,

Awesome story! Very beautiful. I haven't read a good old fashioned bath with daddy story in years! Yours was very nice! Planning to write more?

I think it would have been better if she washed him whilst he was laying in the bath. Finally doing his genitals.