by glory_first
Love your story. I have always wanted to be with a man. Just fantasizing gets me so hard ... and so did your story!
Overall story concept was good, but a little tough to follow. Awkwardly written. Thoughts jumped around a bit... and then seemingly unrelated phrases and clauses were thrown in almost to the point where it seemed like you were trying to add more comas into the story just to get your coma count up.
Related pictures are available at glorybaths.tumblr.com - though with only occasional updates