by marleymusic2002
VERY HOT and erotic, I absolutely love your style and the atmoshpere buildup. I only have to learn from you!
Congratulations.
That story was really hot, PLEASE write a sequel.. maybe concerning how he seduced his wife... :-)
Such a clever way of telling a story...reading an erotic letter and writing about it.
Very erotic.
I liked how you wrote this Marley. It's very erotic and a reminder of how things used to be before social media.
I've printed Lit stories and read them in the bathtub. This is exceptional & very sexy