Battered Ch. 02

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AMHJ89AMHJ89over 9 years ago

Sometimes I feel like somebody's watching me... you probably are honey

tigerrastigerrasabout 11 years ago
.crying

Wow i love this story my emotions are at a high right now.

Her husband is a coward. I bet he is not confrontational when it comes

to arguing with another man. I wish i can jump into this story and beat his

ass one good time for his child and especially for his wife. Good job of writing

this story keep up the great work.

lostchickenlostchickenover 13 years ago

Opps... I meant Hal & Santana. Not that I don't worry about Sabrina too!

lostchickenlostchickenover 13 years ago
Please tell me there is a happy ending...

I love and hate this story all at once - I am so worry for Sabrina and Santana and soooo angry at that jerkoff Jeremy. I just want to jump in there and pull her out and tell her she is beautiful.

luv_romanceluv_romanceabout 14 years ago
hmmmmm.......

i am getting worried for sabrina. keep the story coming please... :) so far so good. make sabrina leave please....or just kill jeremy. hahahaha...now i am being mean. continue...

C_frommnC_frommnabout 14 years ago
Good

So Far So Good

PepperPacePepperPaceover 14 years ago
Hooked

Well you definitely got me hooked! Good storytelling

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Good job

Great job on such a touchy subject

erin1955erin1955over 14 years ago
Fab

Loved it.keep it up.love ur work

ChoclatKizzChoclatKizzover 14 years ago
Good Job with a Sensitive Subject

As disturbing as the physical abuse in this story is, you are telling it beautifully. As I read it I've gone through the gamut of emotions a friend of an abused woman might experience -- anger, frustration, sadness, and hope. You've done a nice job showing how Jeremy's level of violence is escalating -- in the first chapt. he wasn't hitting their son and now in this one he is. Classic signs that if she doesn't get out soon Santana will lose both of his parents. I hope she finds happiness with Luke, and that her abusive relationship ends soon -- though I'm certain the emotional scars will be there for a long time.

Great job -- I look forward to seeing what happens next!!

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