All Comments on 'Battle Hardened, War Weary'

So well written. Hope to see Ch 2 posted soon.

Excellent story. I hope you continue it. Very nicely done.

I am very interested in this story.Keep up the good work.

she belongs with truck and needs to find the strength to leave Ryan before it's too late. she obviously has suffered serious abuse and it continues with Ryan. she had a breakthrough with truck and seems to be an intelligent woman. Please don't let her continue to be a victim.

Please don't let us wait half a year for the next part. With that being said, I don't want her to end up with Truck, I want her to find someone that can actually love her and not take a sudden interest because he sees that she's damaged. They are both using her and she deserves so much more. If she ends up with Truck I just hope it's after he's found out everything so he can't leave her for not telling him ALL of her past. Secondly I know this is your story, I'm not telling you what to do, this is just how I feel, Ryan NEEDS to die... just saying.

Nice work. I'm looking forward to your next update.

... and it has nothing to do with the Texans losing the AFC Divisional Round to the Patriots!

I am freaking out that there are people, ACTUAL PEOPLE, who had read my story!

Oh my goodness, thank you so much!

In regards to the story, I have submitted the second chapter into Literotica, two days ago. Now I am waiting to see if the chapter has been approved.

Based off of a suggestion, from a friend of mine, I also submitted this chapter (and two more chapters) of "Battle-Hardened, War Weary" in the "Interracial Love" category, ever since there will be chapters where there is no sex scenes.

Oh my... (proceeds to freak out)

Poignant, endearing, sad, and hopeful. These words describe your story. I anxiously await your next installment. Excellent work.

Being a male who has been confused about some of the things people will do to each other both in and out of bed. I hope this story will tell me a little more to answer the question. Very well done story so far, I will read the rest with anticipation. Thank you.

Oh love the picture in your biography cutie.

The atrocious grammar made this story a difficult read.

Interesting story, I'd like to know more about their background: from Highschool and how they end up meeting again after. I fear a pregnancy story lurking. Also some stuff are not clear: how come she had sex with Truck in highschool if she was unable to be close or intimate due to her past abuses?

The character of Kali is well-developed. The story is regretfully replete with syntax, case, and tense errors, hence 3/5.

I’m late to this party but truck is a very unlikeable character.