All Comments on 'Battlefield Ch. 04'

Woo-hoo. Keep it coming - this is terrific.

Oh wow I get so happy when I see another chapter!! Thank you

Yes, I know I'm demanding, and tend to be unreasonable. But this story is pretty darned well written and thought out. Keep the chapters coming.

Thank you for all the comments on this tale, this is what truly inspires an author to keep writing. There are more chapters to come in this story as it does have a conclusion that it is ramping up to. I hope you all continue to enjoy it.

I absolutely love the fact that it seems like there is a chapter popping up every day. I love the story line and character development. Can't wait to see John get his in the end. I know that jail time isn't going to cool him down if anything it will just make him worse. I feel as if there is a lot more to Dragon's background than what he has revealed so far.

so freakin awesome!!! I just love this story and how its getting better and better.

So many variables can happen the way that you've written it. So many awesome possibilities. I love how Dragon has taken a stand to protect not only Kitty but Charlene as well. A true gentleman, and I love his character.

thank you so much for continuing this story....5 more stars from me!!!

this is an awesome story and i can't wait for more :-)

while the pace is slightly on the quick side for me there's still enough 'meat' in there to keep me glued to the story and wanting to read more.

i love that Dragon is into Charlene, and not Kitty. *especially* if there's a potential baby on board! i love that he's questioning himself about what's right to do. well done!

a really good story where the abuse is corrected by others in the lifestyle.there are so many stories on here that put the pain into the realm of abuse and say this is how we treat are subs.to me that is nothing but abuse and rape.like the 1 dom said safe sane consensual leaving your subbie bleeding and barely able to walk is neither of those.yes there maybe some that are into the extreme end of the pain spectrum,but when the dom doesnt know when to stop or walk away from the sub that wants out they are showing they are only into the abuse for the abuse sake