All Comments on 'Battlefield Ch. 05'

wonderful chapter. loved how Charlene is getting into her role, loved Lorena and the little bit more about her and The Spot, and how they banned the bastard for life.

one small note - having two charachters named 'John' there was a bit jarring. would have been good to call the whip master some different name.

love this story! 5 stars yet again :)

Love the storyline so far. Great work building up, providing backstory, and filling in without obvious exposition. You're doing a great job, now stop reading about how great you are and write more chapters! Lol

OH my gosh, this story is so amazing and getting hotter by the minute.

I was hoping that Charlene, Kitty and Dragon would end up together, and my wish came true. The scene between them was scorching hot and I loved every word!!!

I can't wait to see where else this story goes.....5 more hot stars from me.

Before reading the next chapter I finally did a general search on "Battlefield, Jordin Sparks", whom you are quoting. I'd never heard that before - wonderful! I look forward to reading the next chapter with some of those images in my mind (maybe). I am loving this story. Thank you for writing and sharing.