All Comments on 'BBC Hotel Surprise'

Would you let the British Broadcast Company bang you wife without a condom for twenty minutes. Finish High School and then try writing erotic stories with a little more than a sex scene. Thanks for the read

It's in the wrong place and the wrong time.

Why does husband want her manhandled by bbc? Why is he allowed bareback dribbling precum in her. Why would husband touch her after 9" long soda can had her almost fisting her. Where is husband's enjoyment and how could wife feel husband's cock?

Who really liked BBC? "All I could think about was that BBC" (from the other story)...And in this the BBC foned him, not the wife...I think it was him...1*

First posts in 9 years, and both in wrong category? Just looks like suspicious activity.

Didn't read the previous stories to see if they sucked as badly as these two; who cares?

Not even a great editor could save this mess. UGH!

I gave you a5 for effort, content and to help your score from the asshole of LIT, dear annoy!!

Exactly WHAT was the surprise touted in the title? There was not a single suspenseful moment in the entire (but short) tale! The sleeping wife knew BBC was coming, but crashed anyway!

Besides which it is in the wrong category!

CRAP is a four letter word like SHIT.

Those fans might actually enjoy it.

All those morons that come to interracial section and complain about the stories that have Blackmen in them. For the retarded section it's about time you learned to deal with your learning disabilities.

i love nasty white whores and the only comment I have is if she can still talk shit while he's fucking her he's not being rough and hard enough. He needs to take her breath away or bring a friend.

Thanks to this author for keeping the husband present ...hate the authors that have wife fucking behind hubby's back

i know how she felt getting a bbc deep and i'm a man