All Comments on 'BCW Pt. 05: The Spark that Glowed'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good...but

This was good, but it introduced a lot of characters that some readers might not be familiar with. Also the time travel was weird and felt very out of place.

KingKongBundy117KingKongBundy117over 5 years ago
I like this series

I love wrestling fics but unfortunately the only other guy that wrote good one's (mtl17) has quit watching wrestling and quit writing about it. So thankfully your wrestling series is still going. I agree with the other comment, I don't watch glow and the time travel was weird. Also I feel like there could be more animosity between the women and more humiliation and shame involved with bottoming. Anal too if possible.

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I welcome all criticism, as I've always been much more left-brain than right brain. I mainly enjoy lesbian and shower stories, among others.

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