All Comments on 'BDSM Bandits Story 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
More is needed

I think another chapter is needed of when the girls all come over and watch the video.

I'm sure mom would like to have both of her workers and I also think the son would not mind a crack at them also.

BEERQUACKBEERQUACKabout 6 years ago
sweet story

hope to see more, maybe all 3 ladies riding that cock!!!

lespoon1lespoon1about 6 years ago
5+

A very enjoyable and well-written piece with a clever, unique twist.

MstChiefMstChiefabout 6 years ago
Gotta have more

Have write more of this story. I am interested in the file, "what we get".

Bi47Bi47about 6 years ago
WOW 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

This was magnificent!!!!!!! Please I hope you will continue with Trevor turning into Trina!!!!!!! I love every second from the two girls play with each other. To Trevor the up sexual with his mother. Then turning into Trina wearing lingerie!!!!!!!!! Excellent

Funewriter1Funewriter1about 6 years ago

This was an excellent story and I can't wait to read more of your works. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
It had it all

Incest, bondage, lesbianism and cross dressing.

Shame it didn't work as a story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I totally loved it. The bondage was totally hot. Well done!! I still get hot just thinking about it!! Thank you.

Tburd

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
miss me with that ghey shit

falls apart pretty fast and completely ruined by the crossdressing shite

Gym52Gym52over 1 year ago

A good start for a story, unfortunately no 02 has made an appearance, therefore I have to assume that you either dried up or you became disenchanted with your writing, a pity as this was shaping up to be a great unusual story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good start to the the story the you ruined it with the whole crossdressing bit.

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