All Comments on 'BDSM Beach Vacation Pt. 05'

by highfunctioningsociopath

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

No tag for choking reduces score.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You may function

But you can't write for a hill of beans. This was poorly done, start to finish. Thoroughly unlikeable characters. Just plain bad.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

wow...intense doesn't cover it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago

I thoroughly enjoyed this story start to finish, don't listen to the naysayers.

Is there more to come?

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