All Comments on 'Be Careful What You Wish For Pt. 01'

Very good story, you should continue it

The author repeats a given same thing more than once. Like on the first page the pargraph pair starting with the line "Easy fix. GET...LAID,,," so how many other similar occurances are there, stopped reading as likely this would happen again and why read the same thing again.

I noticed the repeats as well at first glance. I am however, glad I continued the read. The different POV was nice. It allowed me insight into both characters. Enjoyable read, can't wait to see what happens as the story continues.

Absolutely loved this story! Came twice reading it. ;-) definitely hoping for a part 2+. Keep up the good work.

Wet. That is what the story made me. Please continue with part 2 quickly

Calls for more chapters. Thanks

Very nice job! Can't wait for chapter 2!

One of the hottest stories that I've read on this site. Please continue to write about Macie.

Please continue I need more Macey action

That was sooooo fucking good...can't wait for the next chapter.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

this story was so hot I am so horny now, my pussy is dripping wet. cant wait for the next chapter

Can't wait for another chapter!!!

Will you please continue writing this story? I need more of Maci and her daddy

keep going!

I came 3 times Finger fucking myself while reading that!!