All Comments on 'Beach Babe Killer'

by angelvsdevil

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Okay

Your story wasn't too bad except for the fact that I was able to predict the ending about halfway through it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Nice twist at the end :)

jimjam69jimjam69over 4 years ago
Duh

Just too predictable.

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