All Comments on 'Beach Bingo'

by techsan

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
great story

What a well constructed story. Wish I could meet someone from Ky like that !! As I too am a Ky guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
no harm intented,but will you write more

thanks for your time and writings, you're one of the best on this site.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
What a complete piece of stupidity although I ----

am sure that the immature males among the readers will enjoy it

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Im sure

and I am sure that the brain dead, cocksucker readers will rate it as "00"

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Absurdity of Absurdities

Twas a decent subject well written until she moved in to become his pimp.<P>

Then it went south with his desire to marry. Damn - you never marry your pimp<P>

Puzzling but arousing until the end.

servant111servant111over 2 years ago

Great job techsan. You have become one of my favs on this site. Just wish you were still current.... Ah well the existing stuff here bears rereading. This one is kind of absurd...but your outstanding writing particularly with dialogue, pace, and description make it sufficiently believable to work well.

Again Great Job

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