All Comments on 'Beach Holiday'

This story is AMAZING! It is written with the perfect amount of seduction to keep me wanting more and more at each step. I know what is going to happen to her but waiting for her to give in to it, you capture that PERFECTLY! I rings true of the original temptation from old classic seduction movies. This story is so great and I have added it to my favorites. Definitely one I'd like to revisit from time to time. ;) A++++

Another silly little story. Well written, but the development is silly. What 18 year old female wouldn't know what was happening, with the attention she was receiving and the activities in which Paul engaged.

In UK he'd be nicked, tried and in jail by the middle of page 1.