All Comments on 'Beach House Vacation Ch. 01'

Really building up nicely - looking forward to the next episode

Very hot, well written and nothing that would make me think "This is not possible." Even if the story in totally fiction, I like for it to be "Believable." This one certainly is. Looking forward to the next chapter.

GREAT story so far! Cannot wait for the next part!

A great beginning for your Beach Vacation story. It brings back some wonderful memories of a similar situation for me. I look forward to how Tom and Michelle continue to tease each other and how Tom's sister might be involved in this new relationship also!

Sexy!